OP Waifus - Chapter 18.1
Meeting an older sister in a closed guild
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Nagi: “Ummm… We completed the quest right?”
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Blue haired girl: “Yes you did.”
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In response to my question, the blue haired girl nodded.
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Right, she understands me.
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Nagi: “This is the [Common Guild] right?”
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Blue haired girl: “Yes. Like you’ve said, this is the [Common Guild].”
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So I have not warped into another world.
At least acknowledge that you ripped off others
Nagi: “This is a piece of [Large Bat’s Ears] proving my completion of the quest is it not?”
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Blue haired girl: “Yes it is.”
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Nagi: “You know I’m not lying right?”
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Blue haired girl: “I know. You guys killed all the Large Bats.”
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Nagi: “This is my membership card. My name is Souma Nagi
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Blue haired girl: “I have confirmed it. The quest is over.”
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Nagi: “I worked hard didn’t I.”
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Blue haired girl: “Yes you worked hard.”
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Nagi: “It’s great isn’t it.”
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Blue haired girl: “It is.”
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Nagi: “Please give me the reward.”
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Blue haired girl: “I can’t pay you. The guild has closed down.”
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It feels like I’m listening to pre-recorded messages.
Well, maybe. I have no idea how many times I’ve said the same things already.
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So… The guild has closed down huh.
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These things happen regularly right? Nothing I can do about it.
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Nagi: “Uh… Why?”
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Blue haired girl: “All the guild members were killed.”
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Nagi: “By who?”
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Blue haired girl: “By the [Noble Guild].”
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Nagi: “So you are...?”
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Leticia: “I am Leticia Milfe. A childhood friend of Aine.”
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Saying this, Leticia returned me two guild membership cards.
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One that looks like the normal [Common Guild] membership cards.
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And another one that is made of metal, belonging to…
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Nagi: “The [Noble Guild]?”
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Leticia: “While I am Aine’s childhood friend, I also come from a noble family.”
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Nagi: “Nobility? Then aren’t you one of the enemy?”
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Leticia: “That’s not a joke right?”
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Raising her voice, Leticia slammed her fist against the wall.
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Leticia: “Please don’t group me with those idiots. Slimy aristocrats that don’t ever listen. Lots of them are useless with nothing other than pride. Even though we are all nobility, unlike them, I won’t run at the sight of an insect! Die! They should all die!”
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Leticia continues hitting the wall out of anger.
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Nagi: “It’s ok to be angry, but can you please explain the situation?”
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Leticia: “It’s all because of the cursed sword.”
All because of the cursed sword…
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The [Noble Guild] heard of the news…
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What happened to all the [Common Guild] members who participated in the quest?
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Leticia: “The [Noble Guild] can’t accept the [Common Guild] getting the cursed sword and becoming equals to them. Making use of an expelled member of the [Common Guild], they attacked the [Common Guild] members in the dungeon. Most were beaten up, only a few escaped. That’s all I know.”
At least acknowledge that you ripped off others
Nagi: “Hold on. Aren’t the [Noble Guild] members really weak?”
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Leticia: “They got a strong priest to support them by pressuring him to betray the [Iturna Cult].”
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Nagi: “The [Iturna Cult] huh… The leader was a lower aristocrat wasn’t he.”
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Leticia: “The priest was a neutral party, so he switched sides under pressure from the leaders of the [Iturna Cult]. Can you imagine if your healer switched sides and join the enemy? More so if it happens during a battle with monsters.”
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Nagi: “I know. It’s really bad.”
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What happens if your priest joins the enemy party in an RPG?
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I lose healing magic while the damage I deal to the enemy is healed.
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There is no doubt that reality would be a really shitty game.
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Nagi: “Isn’t it better to destroy that cult?”
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Leticia: “I agree. Aene had protested about a lot of things to the [Nobility Guild]. And then…”
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Official TL at FishyTranslation.com
At least acknowledge that you ripped off others
Do not copy without approval
At least acknowledge that you ripped off others
The count who is responsible for the [Nobility Guild] had said...
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“I know of no such outrageous acts. I wish that you would not accuse me of such baseless allegations.”
At least acknowledge that you ripped off others
“That said, I understand your feelings.”
Official TL at FishyTranslation.com
“So let us meet in the middle.”
This is Stolen Work
“I will get them to promise not to touch the [Common Guild].”
This is Stolen Work
“There must still be injured adventurers who cannot make it out of the dungeon right?”
At least acknowledge that you ripped off others
“Let us do our best and help them out. Of course, that’s assuming you accept my conditions.”
This is Stolen Work
At least acknowledge that you ripped off others
Official TL at FishyTranslation.com
Link to Google Docs in Table of Content (No white text)
This is Stolen Work
Nagi: “Ummm… We completed the quest right?”
Do not copy without approval
Blue haired girl: “Yes you did.”
Do not copy without approval
In response to my question, the blue haired girl nodded.
Aggregator sites go fuck yourselves
Right, she understands me.
Do not copy without approval
Nagi: “This is the [Common Guild] right?”
At least acknowledge that you ripped off others
Blue haired girl: “Yes. Like you’ve said, this is the [Common Guild].”
Official TL at FishyTranslation.com
So I have not warped into another world.
At least acknowledge that you ripped off others
Nagi: “This is a piece of [Large Bat’s Ears] proving my completion of the quest is it not?”
This is Stolen Work
Blue haired girl: “Yes it is.”
This is Stolen Work
Nagi: “You know I’m not lying right?”
Aggregator sites go fuck yourselves
Blue haired girl: “I know. You guys killed all the Large Bats.”
Aggregator sites go fuck yourselves
Nagi: “This is my membership card. My name is Souma Nagi
This is Stolen Work
Blue haired girl: “I have confirmed it. The quest is over.”
This is Stolen Work
Nagi: “I worked hard didn’t I.”
This is Stolen Work
Blue haired girl: “Yes you worked hard.”
Do not copy without approval
Nagi: “It’s great isn’t it.”
Aggregator sites go fuck yourselves
Blue haired girl: “It is.”
Aggregator sites go fuck yourselves
Nagi: “Please give me the reward.”
Official TL at FishyTranslation.com
Blue haired girl: “I can’t pay you. The guild has closed down.”
Do not copy without approval
It feels like I’m listening to pre-recorded messages.
Well, maybe. I have no idea how many times I’ve said the same things already.
This is Stolen Work
So… The guild has closed down huh.
At least acknowledge that you ripped off others
These things happen regularly right? Nothing I can do about it.
This is Stolen Work
Nagi: “Uh… Why?”
This is Stolen Work
Blue haired girl: “All the guild members were killed.”
Official TL at FishyTranslation.com
Nagi: “By who?”
Do not copy without approval
Blue haired girl: “By the [Noble Guild].”
Do not copy without approval
Nagi: “So you are...?”
Do not copy without approval
Leticia: “I am Leticia Milfe. A childhood friend of Aine.”
This is Stolen Work
Saying this, Leticia returned me two guild membership cards.
At least acknowledge that you ripped off others
One that looks like the normal [Common Guild] membership cards.
Do not copy without approval
And another one that is made of metal, belonging to…
This is Stolen Work
Nagi: “The [Noble Guild]?”
Official TL at FishyTranslation.com
Leticia: “While I am Aine’s childhood friend, I also come from a noble family.”
This is Stolen Work
Nagi: “Nobility? Then aren’t you one of the enemy?”
Aggregator sites go fuck yourselves
Leticia: “That’s not a joke right?”
Aggregator sites go fuck yourselves
Raising her voice, Leticia slammed her fist against the wall.
At least acknowledge that you ripped off others
Leticia: “Please don’t group me with those idiots. Slimy aristocrats that don’t ever listen. Lots of them are useless with nothing other than pride. Even though we are all nobility, unlike them, I won’t run at the sight of an insect! Die! They should all die!”
Aggregator sites go fuck yourselves
Leticia continues hitting the wall out of anger.
Official TL at FishyTranslation.com
Nagi: “It’s ok to be angry, but can you please explain the situation?”
Aggregator sites go fuck yourselves
Leticia: “It’s all because of the cursed sword.”
All because of the cursed sword…
Do not copy without approval
The [Noble Guild] heard of the news…
At least acknowledge that you ripped off others
What happened to all the [Common Guild] members who participated in the quest?
Do not copy without approval
Leticia: “The [Noble Guild] can’t accept the [Common Guild] getting the cursed sword and becoming equals to them. Making use of an expelled member of the [Common Guild], they attacked the [Common Guild] members in the dungeon. Most were beaten up, only a few escaped. That’s all I know.”
At least acknowledge that you ripped off others
Nagi: “Hold on. Aren’t the [Noble Guild] members really weak?”
Aggregator sites go fuck yourselves
Leticia: “They got a strong priest to support them by pressuring him to betray the [Iturna Cult].”
At least acknowledge that you ripped off others
Nagi: “The [Iturna Cult] huh… The leader was a lower aristocrat wasn’t he.”
Official TL at FishyTranslation.com
Leticia: “The priest was a neutral party, so he switched sides under pressure from the leaders of the [Iturna Cult]. Can you imagine if your healer switched sides and join the enemy? More so if it happens during a battle with monsters.”
Official TL at FishyTranslation.com
Nagi: “I know. It’s really bad.”
This is Stolen Work
What happens if your priest joins the enemy party in an RPG?
At least acknowledge that you ripped off others
I lose healing magic while the damage I deal to the enemy is healed.
Do not copy without approval
There is no doubt that reality would be a really shitty game.
Do not copy without approval
Nagi: “Isn’t it better to destroy that cult?”
Do not copy without approval
Leticia: “I agree. Aene had protested about a lot of things to the [Nobility Guild]. And then…”
Do not copy without approval
Official TL at FishyTranslation.com
At least acknowledge that you ripped off others
Do not copy without approval
At least acknowledge that you ripped off others
The count who is responsible for the [Nobility Guild] had said...
Official TL at FishyTranslation.com
“I know of no such outrageous acts. I wish that you would not accuse me of such baseless allegations.”
At least acknowledge that you ripped off others
“That said, I understand your feelings.”
Official TL at FishyTranslation.com
“So let us meet in the middle.”
This is Stolen Work
“I will get them to promise not to touch the [Common Guild].”
This is Stolen Work
“There must still be injured adventurers who cannot make it out of the dungeon right?”
At least acknowledge that you ripped off others
“Let us do our best and help them out. Of course, that’s assuming you accept my conditions.”
This is Stolen Work
At least acknowledge that you ripped off others
Official TL at FishyTranslation.com
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Good work there!
ReplyDeleteFirst thing first, this is a novel, not drama script. If you want to add their name, (since I know this novel is really dialogue heavy) add it after the sentence. Or better, make them distinct enough so we can know who's speaking.
About the terms, it was [Itulna] before, though [Iturna] is acceptable since the Japanese can't differentiate L and R.
About the English, I'm also from SEA so our English skill is not that different. I can't help you with this one.
Thanks for the advice.
DeleteCould you give me and example on how the name should be added?
I'm really not used to story styled writing after all the argumentative essays we do in school.
You know, like you often found in another wn,
Delete"dialogue."(name)
Or the--
"dialogue" says someone,
--style.
Just to give you an example on how to work with the names:
DeleteExtract from previous translation:
Accordingly,
「Then Cecyl, let’s go with the plan. Rita, I want you on-standby under that smashed window.」(Nagi)
「Understood. Please be careful, Nagi and Cecyl-chan.」(Rita)
As you can see the names are added in brackets behind the sentences. In this case you could actually leave the names out because there are only 3 people in this scene and 2 are mentioned by name which would leave the last person being the one who is speaking.
The only problem is that some characters in japanese novels tend to call themselves by their name which could cause confusion as to who is speaking. So my advice would be to simply add the names in brackets behind the sentences.
Unfortunately both methods messes with Blogspot's formatting, so I'll have to stick to this format. Sorry about that.
Deletewell, this was understandable, so congrats on that part. I'm sure that it wasn't easy, but it's still workable. If you find an editor that will work with you, I'm sure you'll have a MUCH easier time with it.
ReplyDeletethat aside,
Thanks for the chapter
Lali~ho!
Thank you ^^ Maybe eventually I'll branch out and look for any editor ^^
DeleteThanks for the chapter!!
ReplyDeleteDanke für das Kapitel (thanks for the chapter in German) ^^
ReplyDeleteThanks for picking this novel up. I really like it. Though I have a problem with the format. There are some long sentences which run over the monitor and i have to sidescroll. Is that only me?
ReplyDeleteNope, I was trying out some stuff and ruined the formatting XD Fixed it though
DeleteThanks for the treat.
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